Saturday, February 14, 2009

Shattered Valentine



Wanting a special day at last
Just letting go of the dark memories from the past
He wanted a gift from someone special
But that person seemed to be so close-minded and superficial

He watched all of his friends get many gifts from each other
And saw their eyes filling with tons of joy
Seeing his friends continuously giving and taking
He realized his heart would never stop breaking

With every present going around
He felt very lonely and a tear fell to the ground
Keeping high hopes for that single Valentine
He waited, and waited, to officially call that girl behind

That boy had his dream shattered until it was a small piece
Negative thoughts ran through his mind, and his agony wouldn't decrease
He kept up his hopes for that one girl he admired
Since she was the only girl he truly desired

In the end, in that girl's eyes, he was only a reject
His Valentine's Day was now totally wrecked
Without a single present or someone to call his own
He left home that day - torn, miserable, and alone






4 comments:

  1. 'In life u should be strong, to readily face any storm that will come along your way'...A small phrase i could say about the message : 'Shattered Valentine'

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  2. Its me Ashraf, Sahrajameela who posted it...keep it up...regards,Cheers!

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  3. My comment is what were you doing just sitting around waiting for a present? Did you not think that the one you are expecting to give you gift is also expecting you to make her feel your presence too? What if she was also waiting and waiting but not for a gift or material thing but waiting for just a single call to let her know she still owns your heart. Did you even call her that day?.. Did you? and now you are sad about your shattered valentine but what about this lady.. who has a shattered life. Because you are her life.

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  4. TO AVOID CHATTERED VALENTINE,IN A RELATIONSHIP WE MUST BE ELLASTIC.DONT EXPECT POSSITIVE ALWAYS IF THE GIRL YOU ADMIRED IS NOT SINCER TO YOU.

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